a comparison of the versions of 1812 and 1857
compiled and translated by
D. L. Ashliman
© 2000-2002
First edition, 1812 |
Final edition, 1857 |
Hansel and Gretel |
Hansel and Gretel |
Next to a great forest there lived a poor woodcutter who had come upon such hard times that he could scarcely provide daily bread for his wife and his two children, Hansel and Gretel. Finally he could no longer even manage this, and he did not know where to turn for help. |
Next to a great forest there lived a poor woodcutter with his wife and his two children. The boy's name was Hansel and the girl's name was Gretel. He had but little to eat, and once, when a great famine came to the land, he could no longer provide even their daily bread. |
One evening as he was lying in bed worrying about his problems, his wife said to him, "Listen, man, early tomorrow take the two children, give each of them a little piece of bread, then lead them into the middle of thickest part of the woods, make a fire for them, and leave them there, for we can no longer feed them." |
One evening as he was lying in bed worrying about his problems, he sighed and said to his wife, "What is to become of us? How can we feed our children when we have nothing for ourselves?" "Man, do you know what?" answered the woman. "Early tomorrow morning we will take the two children out into the thickest part of the woods, make a fire for them, and give each of them a little piece of bread, then leave them by themselves and go off to our work. They will not find their way back home, and we will be rid of them." |
"No, woman," said the man, "I cannot bring myself to abandon my own children to wild animals that would quickly tear them to pieces." |
"No, woman," said the man. "I will not do that. How could I bring myself to abandon my own children alone in the woods? Wild animals would soon come and tear them to pieces." |
"If you don't do it," said the woman, "all of us will starve together," and she gave him no peace until he said yes. |
"Oh, you fool," she said, "then all four of us will starve. All you can do is to plane the boards for our coffins." And she gave him no peace until he agreed. "But I do feel sorry for the poor children," said the man. |
The two children were still awake from hunger and heard everything that the mother had said to the father. |
The two children had not been able to fall asleep because of their hunger, and they heard what the stepmother had said to the father. |
Gretel thought that she was doomed and began to cry pitifully, but Hansel said, "Be quiet, Gretel, and don't worry. I know what to do." |
Gretel cried bitter tears and said to Hansel, "It is over with us!" "Be quiet, Gretel," said Hansel, "and don't worry. I know what to do." |
With that he got up, pulled on his jacket, opened the lower door, and crept outside. |
And as soon as the adults had fallen asleep, he got up, pulled on his jacket, opened the lower door, and crept outside. |
The moon was shining brightly, and the white pebbles were glistening like silver coins. Hansel bent over and filled his jacket pockets with them, as many as would fit. |
The moon was shining brightly, and the white pebbles in front of the house were glistening like silver coins. Hansel bent over and filled his jacket pockets with them, as many as would fit. |
Then he went back into the house and said, "Don't worry, Gretel. Sleep well." Then he went back to bed, and fell asleep. |
Then he went back into the house and said, "Don't worry, Gretel. Sleep well. God will not forsake us." Then he went back to bed. |
The next morning the mother came and woke them both before sunrise, "Get up, you children. We are going into the woods. Here is a little piece of bread. Take care and save it until midday." |
At daybreak, even before sunrise, the woman came and woke the two children. "Get up, you lazybones. We are going into the woods to fetch wood." Then she gave each one a little piece of bread, saying, "Here is something for midday. Don't eat it any sooner, for you'll not get any more." |
Gretel put the bread under her apron, because Hansel's pockets were full of stones, and they set forth into the woods. |
Gretel put the bread under her apron, because Hansel's pockets were full of stones. Then all together they set forth into the woods. |
After they had walked a little way, Hansel began stopping again and again and looking back toward the house. |
After they had walked a little way, Hansel began stopping again and again and looking back toward the house. |
The father said, "Hansel, why are you stopping and looking back? Pay attention now, and keep up with us." |
The father said, "Hansel, why are you stopping and looking back? Pay attention now, and don't forget your legs." |
"Oh, father, I am looking at my white cat that is sitting on the roof and wants to say good-bye to me." |
"Oh, father," said Hansel, "I am looking at my white cat that is sitting on the roof and wants to say good-bye to me." |
The mother said, "You fool, that isn't your cat. That's the morning sun shining on the chimney." |
The woman said, "You fool, that isn't your cat. That's the morning sun shining on the chimney." |
However, Hansel had not been looking at his cat but instead had been dropping the shiny pebbles from his pocket onto the path. |
However, Hansel had not been looking at his cat but instead had been dropping the shiny pebbles from his pocket onto the path. |
When they arrived in the middle of the woods, the father said, "You children gather some wood, and I will make a fire so we won't freeze." |
When they arrived in the middle of the woods, the father said, "You children gather some wood, and I will make a fire so you won't freeze." |
Hansel and Gretel gathered together some twigs, a pile as high as a small mountain |
Hansel and Gretel gathered together some twigs, a pile as high as a small mountain |
They set it afire, and when the flames were burning well, the mother said, "Lie down by the fire and sleep. We will go into the woods to cut down trees. Wait until we come back and get you." |
The twigs were set afire, and when the flames were burning well, the woman said, "Lie down by the fire and rest. We will go into the woods to cut wood. When we are finished, we will come back and get you." |
Hansel and Gretel sat by the fire until midday, and then ate their bread. |
Hansel and Gretel sat by the fire. When midday came each one ate his little piece of bread. |
They sat on until evening, but the mother and father did not return, and no one came to get them. |
Because they could hear the blows of an ax, they thought that the father was nearby. However, it was not an ax. It was a branch that he had tied to a dead tree and that the wind was beating back and forth. After they had sat there a long time, their eyes grew weary and closed, and they fell sound sleep. |
When it became dark, Gretel began to cry, but Hansel said, "Wait a little until the moon comes up." |
When they finally awoke, it was dark at night. Gretel began to cry and said, "How will we get out of woods?" Hansel comforted her, "Wait a little until the moon comes up, and then we'll find the way." |
After the moon had come up, he took Gretel by the hand. |
After the full moon had come up, Hansel took his little sister by the hand. |
The pebbles were lying there like newly minted coins. Glistening, they showed them the way. |
They followed the pebbles that glistened there like newly minted coins, showing them the way. |
They walked throughout the entire night, and as morning was breaking, they arrived at the father's house. |
They walked throughout the entire night, and as morning was breaking, they arrived at the father's house. |
The father was overjoyed when he saw his children once more, for he had not wanted to leave them alone. The mother pretended that she too was happy, but secretly she was angry. |
They knocked on the door, and when the woman opened it and saw that it was Hansel and Gretel, she said, "You wicked children, why did you sleep so long in the woods? We thought that you did not want to come back." But the father was overjoyed when he saw his children once more, for he had not wanted to leave them alone. |
Not long afterward there was once again no bread in the house, and one evening Hansel and Gretel heard the mother say to the father, "The children found their way back once, and I let it be, but again we have only a half loaf of bread in the house. Tomorrow you must take them deeper into the woods, so they cannot find their way home. Otherwise there will be no help for us." |
Not long afterward there was once again great need everywhere, and one evening the children heard the mother say to the father, "We have again eaten up everything. We have only a half loaf of bread, and then the song will be over. We must get rid of the children. We will take them deeper into the woods, so they will not find their way out. Otherwise there will be no help for us." |
The man was very disheartened, and he thought it would be better to share the last bit with the children, but because he had done it once, he could not say no. |
The man was very disheartened, and he thought, "It would be better to share the last bit with the children." But the woman would not listen to him, scolded him, and criticized him. He who says A must also say B, and because he had given in the first time, he had to do so the second time as well. |
Hansel and Gretel heard the parents' conversation. |
The children were still awake and had overheard the conversation. |
Hansel got up and wanted to gather pebbles once again, but when he came to the door, he found that the mother had locked it. |
When the adults were asleep, Hansel got up again and wanted to gather pebbles as he had done before, but the woman had locked the door, and Hansel could not get out. |
Still, he comforted Gretel and said, "Just go to sleep, Gretel dear. God will help us." |
But he comforted his little sister and said, "Don't cry, Gretel. Sleep well. God will help us." |
Early the next morning they received their little pieces of bread, even less than the last time. |
Early the next morning the woman came and got the children from their beds. They received their little pieces of bread, even less than the last time. |
On the way, Hansel crumbled his piece in his pocket, then often stood still, and threw crumbs onto the ground. |
On the way to the woods, Hansel crumbled his piece in his pocket, then often stood still, and threw crumbs onto the ground. |
"Why are you always stopping and looking around?" said his father. "Keep walking straight ahead." |
"Hansel, why are you always stopping and looking around?" said his father. "Keep walking straight ahead." |
"Oh!, I can see my pigeon sitting on the roof. It wants to say good-bye to me." |
"I can see my pigeon sitting on the roof. It wants to say good-bye to me." |
"You fool," said his mother, "that isn't your pigeon. That's the morning sun shining on the chimney." |
"Fool," said the woman, "that isn't your pigeon. That's the morning sun shining on the chimney." |
But Hansel crumbled all of his bread and dropped the crumbs onto the path. |
But little by little Hansel dropped all the crumbs onto the path. |
The mother took them deeper into the woods than they had ever been in their whole lifetime. |
The woman took them deeper into the woods than they had ever been in their whole lifetime. |
There they were told to sleep by a large fire, and that the parents would come and get them in the evening. |
Once again a large fire was made, and the mother said, "Sit here, children. If you get tired you can sleep a little. We are going into the woods to cut wood. We will come and get you in the evening when we are finished." |
At midday Gretel shared her bread with Hansel, because he had scattered all of his along the path. |
When it was midday Gretel shared her bread with Hansel, who had scattered his piece along the path. |
Midday passed, and evening passed, but no one came to get the poor children. |
Then they fell asleep, and evening passed, but no one came to get the poor children. |
Hansel comforted Gretel and said, "Wait, when the moon comes up I will be able to see the crumbs of bread that I scattered, and they will show us the way back home." |
It was dark at night when they awoke, and Hansel comforted Gretel and said, "Wait, when the moon comes up I will be able to see the crumbs of bread that I scattered, and they will show us the way back home." |
The moon came up, but when Hansel looked for the crumbs, they were gone. The many thousands of birds in the woods had found them and pecked them up. |
When the moon appeared they got up, but they could not find any crumbs, for the many thousands of birds that fly about in the woods and in the fields had pecked them up. |
Hansel thought that he would still be able to find the way home, and he and Gretel set forth, but they soon became totally lost in the great wilderness. |
Hansel said to Gretel, "We will find our way," but they did not find it. |
They walked through the night and the entire next day, and then, exhausted, they fell asleep. They walked another day, but they could not find their way out of the woods. |
They walked through the entire night and the next day from morning until evening, but they did not find their way out of the woods. |
They were terribly hungry, for they had eaten only a few small berries that were growing on the ground. |
They were terribly hungry, for they had eaten only a few small berries that were growing on the ground. And because they were so tired that their legs would no longer carry them, they lay down under a tree and fell asleep. |
On the third day they walked until midday when they came to a little house built entirely from bread with a roof made of cake, and the windows were made of clear sugar. |
It was already the third morning since they had left the father's house. They started walking again, but managed only to go deeper and deeper into the woods. If help did not come soon, they would perish. At midday they saw a little snow-white bird sitting on a branch. It sang so beautifully that they stopped to listen. When it was finished it stretched its wings and flew in front of them. They followed it until they came to a little house. The bird sat on the roof, and when they came closer, they saw that the little house was built entirely from bread with a roof made of cake, and the windows were made of clear sugar. |
"Let's sit down and eat our fill," said Hansel. "I'll eat from the roof, and Gretel, you eat from the window. That will be nice and sweet for you." |
"Let's help ourselves to a good meal," said Hansel. "I'll eat a piece of the roof, and Gretel, you eat from the window. That will be sweet." |
Hansel had already eaten a piece from the roof and Gretel had eaten a few round windowpanes, and she had just broken out another one when she heard a gentle voice calling out from inside: Nibble, nibble, little mouse, |
Hansel reached up and broke off a little of the roof to see how it tasted, while Gretel stood next to the windowpanes and was nibbling at them. Then a gentle voice called out from inside: Nibble, nibble, little mouse, |
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The children answered: The wind, the wind, They continued to eat, without being distracted. Hansel, who very much like the taste of the roof, tore down another large piece, and Gretel poked out an entire round windowpane. |
Hansel and Gretel were so frightened that they dropped what they were holding in their hands, and immediately they saw a little woman, as old as the hills, creeping out the door. |
Suddenly the door opened, and a woman, as old as the hills and leaning on a crutch, came creeping out. Hansel and Gretel were so frightened that they dropped what they were holding in their hands. |
She shook her head and said, "Oh, you dear children, where did you come from? Come inside with me, and you will be just fine." |
But the old woman shook her head and said, "Oh, you dear children, who brought you here? Just come in and stay with me. No harm will come to you." |
She took them by the hand and led them into her house. |
She took them by the hand and led them into her house. |
Then she served them a good meal: pancakes with sugar, apples, and nuts; and made two nice beds for them. |
Then she served them a good meal: milk and pancakes with sugar, apples, and nuts. Afterward she made two nice beds for them, decked in white. |
Hansel and Gretel went to bed, thinking it was though they were in heaven. |
Hansel and Gretel went to bed, thinking they were in heaven. |
But the old woman was a wicked witch who was lying in wait there for children. |
But the old woman had only pretended to be friendly. She was a wicked witch who was lying in wait there for children. |
She had built her house of bread in order to lure them to her, and if she captured one, she would kill him, cook him, and eat him; and for her that was a day to celebrate. |
She had built her house of bread only in order to lure them to her, and if she captured one, she would kill him, cook him, and eat him; and for her that was a day to celebrate. |
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Witches have red eyes and cannot see very far, but they have a sense of smell like animals, and know when humans are approaching. |
So she was overjoyed that Hansel and Gretel had found their way to her. |
When Hansel and Gretel came near to her, she laughed wickedly and spoke scornfully, "Now I have them. They will not get away from me again." |
Early the next morning, before they awoke, she got up, went to their beds, and looked at the two of them lying there so peacefully. |
Early the next morning, before they awoke, she got up, went to their beds, and looked at the two of them lying there so peacefully, with their full red cheeks. |
"They will be a good mouthful," she thought. |
"They will be a good mouthful," she mumbled to herself. |
She grabbed Hansel and put him in a little stall, and when he awoke, he found himself in a cage, locked up like a young dog, and he could walk only a few steps. |
Then she grabbed Hansel with her withered hand and carried him to a little stall, where she locked him behind a cage door. Cry as he might, there was no help for him. |
Then she shook Gretel and cried, "Get up, lazybones! Fetch water. Go into the kitchen and cook something to eat. Your brother is locked in that stall there. I want to fatten him up, and when he is fat I am going to eat him. For now, you have to feed him." |
Then she shook Gretel and cried, "Get up, lazybones! Fetch water and cook something good for your brother. He is locked outside in the stall and is to be fattened up. When he is fat I am going to eat him." |
Gretel was frightened and cried, but she had to do what the witch demanded. |
Gretel began to cry, but it was all for nothing. She had to do what the witch demanded. |
Now Hansel was given the best things to eat every day, so he would get fat, but Gretel received nothing but crayfish shells. |
Now Hansel was given the best things to eat every day, but Gretel received nothing but crayfish shells. |
Every day the old woman came and said, "Hansel, stick out your finger, so I can feel if you are fat enough yet." |
Every morning the old woman crept out to the stall and shouted, "Hansel, stick out your finger, so I can feel if you are fat yet." |
But Hansel always stuck out a little bone, and she wondered why he didn't get any fatter. |
But Hansel stuck out a little bone, and the old woman, who had bad eyes and could not see the bone, thought it was Hansel's finger, and she wondered why he didn't get fat. |
After four weeks, one evening she said to Gretel, "Hurry up and fetch some water. Whether your brother is fat enough now or not, tomorrow I am going to slaughter him and boil him. In the meantime I want to start the dough that we will bake to go with him." |
When four weeks had passed and Hansel was still thin, impatience overcame her, and she would wait no longer. "Hey, Gretel!" she shouted to the girl, "Hurry up and fetch some water. Whether Hansel is fat or thin, tomorrow I am going to slaughter him and boil him." |
With a sad heart Gretel fetched the water in which Hansel was to be boiled. |
Oh, how the poor little sister sobbed as she was forced to carry the water, and how the tears streamed down her cheeks! |
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"Dear God, please help us," she cried. "If only the wild animals had devoured us in the woods, then we would have died together." "Save your slobbering," said the old woman. "It doesn't help you at all." |
The next morning Gretel had to get up early, make a fire, and hang up the kettle with water. |
The next morning Gretel had to get up early, hang up the kettle with water, and make a fire. |
"Watch it until it boils," said the witch. "I am going to make a fire in the oven and put the bread into it." |
"First we are going to bake," said the old woman. "I have already made a fire in the oven and kneaded the dough." |
Gretel stood in the kitchen and cried tears of blood and thought that it would have been better if wild animals had devoured them in the woods, for then they would at least have died together and would not now be suffering so, and she herself would not have to be boiling the water that would kill her dear brother; and she prayed, "Dear God, save us poor children." |
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Then the old woman called, "Gretel, come here right now to the oven." |
She pushed poor Gretel outside to the oven, from which fiery flames were leaping. |
And when Gretel came, she said, "Look inside and see if the bread is nicely brown and done, for my eyes are weak, and I can't see that far. If you can't see that far either, then sit on the board, and I'll push you inside, then you can walk around inside and take a look." |
"Climb in," said the witch, "and see if it is hot enough to put the bread in yet." |
But once Gretel was inside, the witch intended to close the door, and bake her in the hot oven, and eat her as well. That is what the wicked witch was thinking, and that is why she called Gretel. |
And when Gretel was inside, she intended to close the oven, and bake her, and eat her as well. |
However, God let Gretel know this, so she said, "I don't know how to do that. First show me. You sit on the board, and I will push you inside." |
But Gretel saw what she had in mind, so she said, "I don't know how to do that. How can I get inside?" |
So the old woman sat on the board, and since she was light, Gretel pushed her all the way inside, then quickly closed the door and secured it with an iron bar. |
"Stupid goose," said the old woman. "The opening is big enough. See, I myself could get in." And she crawled up stuck her head into the oven. Then Gretel gave her a shove, causing her to fall in. Then she closed the iron door and secured it with a bar. |
The old woman in the hot oven began to cry and to wail, but Gretel ran away, and the old woman burned up miserably. |
The old woman began to howl frightfully. But Gretel ran away, and the godless witch burned up miserably. |
Gretel ran to Hansel and unlocked his door. |
Gretel ran straight to Hansel, unlocked his stall, and cried, "Hansel, we are saved. The old witch is dead." |
He jumped out, and they kissed each other and were overjoyed. |
Then Hansel jumped out, like a bird from its cage when someone opens its door. How happy they were! They threw their arms around each other's necks, jumped with joy, and kissed one another. |
The whole house was filled with precious stones and pearls. |
Because they now had nothing to fear, they went into the witch's house. In every corner were chests of pearls and precious stones. |
They filled their pockets, then ran away and found their way back home. |
"These are better than pebbles," said Hansel, filling his pockets. Gretel said, "I will take some home with me as well," and she filled her apron full. |
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"But now we must leave," said Hansel, "and get out of these witch-woods." After walking a few hours they arrived at a large body of water. "We cannot get across," said Hansel. "I cannot see a walkway or a bridge." "There are no boats here," answered Gretel, "but there is a white duck swimming. If I ask it, it will help us across." Then she called out: Duckling, duckling, The duckling came up to them, and Hansel climbed onto it, then asked his little sister to sit down next to him. "No," answered Gretel. "That would be too heavy for the duckling. It should take us across one at a time." That is what the good animal did, and when they were safely on the other side, and had walked on a little while, the woods grew more and more familiar to them, and finally they saw the father's house in the distance. They began to run, rushed inside, and threw their arms around the father's neck. |
The father rejoiced when he saw them once more, for he had not had a happy day since they had been gone, and now he was a rich man. However, the mother had died. |
The man had not had even one happy hour since he had left the children in the woods. However, the woman had died. Gretel shook out her apron, scattering pearls and precious stones around the room, and Hansel added to them by throwing one handful after the other from his pockets. |
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Now all their cares were at an end, and they lived happily together. My tale is done, And whoever catches it can make for himself from it a large, large fur cap. |
Wilhelm Grimm was the principal editor of the Children's and Household Tales following their inititial publication. The most significant changes were made already in the second edition (1819), although Wilhelm continued to revise the stories until their final edition (1857).
The most substantive alteration in the text of "Hansel and Gretel" is transformation of the children's mother into a stepmother. In both the manuscript version (1810) and the first printed edition (1812) of this well-known tale, the woodcutter's wife is identified unambiguously and repeatedly as "the mother." The second edition (1819), which saw numerous changes in the formulation of many tales, is equally clear in identifying the woodcutter's wife as Hansel's and Gretel's mother. However, with the fourth edition (1840) the Grimms introduced the word "stepmother," although they retained the word "mother" in some passages. The Grimms' final version of the famous tale (seventh edition, 1857) refers to the woodcutter's wife once as "the stepmother," twice as "the mother," and about a dozen times generically as "the woman."
Whereas the children's mother/stepmother grows harsher in succeeding editions, their father grows more introspective and milder, perhaps too mild, for he is unwilling or unable to stand up to his domineering wife. "It would be better to share the last bit with the children." he thinks, in a passage added already in the 1819 edition, but his wife will not listen to him.
In keeping with revisions made to other tales, Wilhelm added numerous small embellishments to "Hansel and Gretel," making the tale more dramatic, more literary, and more sentimental in succeeding editions. The most prominent example in this regard is the addition of the episode describing the children's escape from the sinister woods across a large body of water, one at a time, on the back of a duck.
In the first edition the Grimms spell their heroes' names "Hänsel" and "Gretel." In the second edition, "Hänsel" and "Grethel." All modern German editions use the spellings "Hänsel" and "Gretel." There is no reason to include the Umlaut (whether spelled "Hänsel" or "Haensel") in an English translation of the name "Hansel," nor is there any justification for an English translator to revert to the obsolete spelling "Grethel."
The phrase "die Frau" occurs fequently in "Hansel and Gretel," especially in the final edition. This phrase can be translated as "his wife," "the wife," "his woman," or "the woman." In my judgment, the generic "the woman" best fits the story's child's-eye perspective and tone.
The traditional translation of the witch's verse query "Nibble, nibble, little mouse,/ Who is nibbling at my house?" is too good to abandon, although the original German "Knuper, knuper, kneischen,/ Wer knupert an meinem Häuschen?" does not specifically mention a mouse.
Revised November 6, 2002.